Not sure I like your formatting - personal preference but I don't like scrolling left to right...
See below, replaced a lot of tabs with spaces and I find it easier to read. Also split up lines that contained for example "{row {column"
What is it telling you when it doesn't launch or do anything? Are there any error messages? No error messages and the LISP is doing as you ask it to so there is another problem.
Looking at re-fomatted DCL code, below, I have 2 spaces indenting for each { and back 2 spaces for each closing } . If there are matching pairs of { } then the last } should be indented 2 spaces in.... which it isn't - I think you have missed closing a column and boxed column? I find it helps to note what each closing bracket is for - just to to help me work it all out
"MLStyle_Setting : dialog"
"{"
"initial_focus = \"Accept\";"
"label = \"Setting mlines/Options hatch\";"
"width = 45;"
": boxed_column {"
" : column {"
": row {"
": text { label = \"Mline hatch\"; }"
"}" ; end row
": row {"
": text { label = \"Layer\"; }"
": spacer { width = 7; }"
": popup_list { key = \"MLine_Layer\"; width = 22; }"
"spacer_1;"
": popup_list { key = \"Hatch_Layer\"; width = 22; }"
"spacer_1;"
"}" ; end row
": row {"
": column { height = 5; fixed_height = true;"
": row {"
": text { key = \"MLStyle_Style\"; label = \"Style mline: \"; }"
": popup_list { key = \"MLStyles_List\"; edit_width = 20; list = \"Standard\"; value = \"0\"; allow_accept = true; }"
"}" ; end row
": spacer { height = 0.01; }"
": row {"
": edit_box { label = \"Scanle mline: \"; key = \"Scale_Value\"; edit_width = 11; edit_limit = 12; value = \"\"; }"
"}" ; end row
": spacer { height = 0.01; }"
": row {"
" : column {"
": row {"
": popup_list { label = \"Osnap mline: \"; key = \"Justification_Value\"; edit_width = 10; list = \"\\nTop \\nCenter \\nBottom\"; value = \"\"; }"
"}" ; end row
": spacer { height = 0.01; }"
": row {"
": toggle { label = \" Closed mline\"; key = \"Mline_Closed\"; value = \"0\";}}}}"
"}" ; end row
": boxed_column { width = 24;"
": image_button { key = \"Mline_Preview\"; is_tab_stop = false; color = black; height = 4.7; fixed_height = true;}"
"spacer_1;"
"}" ; end boxed column
"}" ; end row
"spacer_1;"
": row {"
": text { key = \"Hatch_Selection\"; label = \"Hatch mline:end\"; fixed_width = true; width = 28; }"
": button { key = \"Hatch_Selection_Button\"; label = \"Option hatch\"; fixed_width = true; width = 1; height = 1; }"
"spacer_0;"
; ": toggle { label = \" Enable hatch\"; key = \"enable\"; value = \"0\";}"
"spacer_1;"
"}" ; end row
": spacer { height = 0.01; }"
"}" ; end row
": row { height = 3.5;"
": spacer { height = 2; width = 2; }"
": button { key = \"Accept\"; label = \"Ok\"; fixed_width = true; width = 10; height = 2; }"
": button { key = \"Cancel\"; label = \"Cancel\"; fixed_width = true; width = 10; height = 2; is_cancel = true; }"
": spacer { width = 1.5; }"
"}" ; end row
"errtile;"
"}" ; end row